
Everything that I knew needed work on was mentioned in the critique. The boxes need more lighter values to define the edges so they have that cardboard look. The hard edges will also place some tension against the soft, wavy water. The bottle needs to be round on the top like the bottom of the bottle so it looks as if its pointing away from you. To create depth in the water, I need to put some darker values on the water that is suppose to be farthest away. I also need to have the sky get darker as it meets the sky so that it looks more open than flat. I thought it was a cool idea when Anthony showed me how to put line of color in the water to create some movement. But he was right when he said I put so much in there, that I ended up with the same monotone water as I had before. I need to add strategically placed values into the water to create some variety.
This project has not only taught me to take everything that I learned and pull into a piece of work, but it has also opened my eyes to not just shrugging off projects. Just because I put a lot of hours into a piece, does not mean it is going to pay off. It is how efficiently you use those hours that depends on if those all nighters paid off or not.